Fig9ux 發表於 12-3-2009 05:15:25

An important messege to administraters in this plaza!

本帖最後由 Fig9ux 於 12-3-2009 05:59 編輯

This is not a complaine. I just wanted to point out that the post you(auman311) posted earlier on the page, which was named as
"If you want to gain more points, do these!"

I though it sounded very odd becuase it was written/ typed in a Chinese style. It really didnt sound right,and therefore I have made this comment, hoping you can change it

to

"In oreder for you to achive(or get) more points, you will need to follow the instructions in this post."

or

"Do these if you wanted to gain more points."


Also a similar problem happened in the post titled as "Attention: No Chinese in the English
Plaza"


Inside this post, it saids:


"As the aim to open this board,
please try to use english in this board.
Even your english is poor, we are appreciative of your attempts;
so, please don't type any Chinese.*"


That also did not sound like proper English.
1.Even your english is poor...It should be even "IF"your English is poor
2. we are appreciative of your attempts - I think it sound better when you say " We will appreciate your attempts"
3. As the aim to open this board.... You should say " Chinese is strictly forbidden in this area as the main purpose for the opening of this plaza is to get everybody to speak English inside this area."

PS.the opinion and complaine zone was blocked and i cannot comment/ reply in that. Please can you guys do something about it?



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