Originally posted by n乂t at 2006-9-15 19:18:
幾好...不過點解係用鳳校來做主題架>3<?
加上下一集係唔係打異拳??= =
Originally posted by makkamfai at 2006-9-15 18:57:
我唔多覺得係你作咁...好似唔知係邊到睇過
Originally posted by Ken168168 at 2006-9-15 21:06:
重唔快d= =!
一開始作快d先有多d人睇= =![過來人]
Originally posted by tamtamex at 2006-9-15 20:23:
如果搵到同我小說差唔多既 小弟冇話可說 以後唔再寫小說-口-
本人唔驚- - 我行得正企得正
Originally posted by n乂t at 2006-9-16 09:37:
個個小說都差唔多講虎令架..更係差唔多啦
好似kir個個講聖財團加有圖先好架ma@_@
Originally posted by Ken168168 at 2006-9-17 19:10:
嘩= =!
點解忍影可以同一個147以上的人打=-=?
Originally posted by tamtamex at 2006-9-17 20:28:
好野>< 人氣紅左喇
小弟會努力作落去,多謝支持
Originally posted by tamtamex at 2006-9-18 17:04:
我想問下各位大大><
你地想我 幾日作一集定一日一日集好?
Originally posted by 乂劍神乂 at 2006-9-18 21:03:
分下段好喎
睇到眼花==
Originally posted by [H]jayfofo at 2006-9-19 21:02:
好悶阿
亂係咪真係少左好多人玩?
Originally posted by [H]jayfofo at 2006-9-19 22:45:
幾好
加油
樓主會唔會作到打完b3王就完嫁?
希望作落去~
Originally posted by n乂t at 2006-9-20 18:31:
之後去埋本社個d地方?
Originally posted by 逝星 at 2006-9-20 19:15:
樓主!!
你不如將全集整埋一齊la!!因為好亂!!睇完會頭暈-0-"""!!bao_50
Originally posted by n乂t at 2006-9-20 18:31:
之後去埋本社個d地方?
Originally posted by 逝星 at 2006-9-21 22:21:
睇完第七話!!
覺得都作得唔錯!!
不過天龍有冇咁廢!!
俾人秒殺-0-"""無奈...
不過還希望樓主多d描述戰鬥的經過!!加多d動作元素會更好!!
Originally posted by [H]jayfofo at 2006-9-21 22:25:
今話最精彩>"<!!(暫時)
可以更加好睇!
雖然 亂版少左好多人發言
希望作者繼續加油!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Originally posted by n乂t at 2006-9-22 17:20:
我要做聖門個個男仔呀><"
唔得既話整多個角色都得既(要超勁架...勁過老師)
Originally posted by 妤妤 at 2006-9-22 23:18:
樓主,你第八話少左d啊- -""
不過好期待下一話@@ 要打會長喇
Originally posted by n乂t at 2006-9-23 00:20:
我要做力敏精拳= ="
一下可以秒左隻會長....KAKA"
你作有一個神秘人....係佢地苦戰緊個時一下秒左會長
呢個人叫nt...原來係無雲個大佬來既...
Originally posted by tamtamex at 2006-9-23 01:25:
可以啊0.0 冇問題
我幫你出埸搞到型d先@@
Originally posted by pklai2828 at 2006-9-22 08:00:
點解天龍去到最后變左死龍=.=?
Originally posted by 妤妤 at 2006-9-23 17:26:
咁樓主啊,咁我個角色幾時出埸
Originally posted by 妤妤 at 2006-9-23 18:01:
咁幾時先更新啊?
Originally posted by [C.P.S]AK47 at 2006-9-23 18:11:
整個比我啦-0-
叫做灰煙
玄"炎"
力敏精劍
(唔1定要好勁.但係唔好死就得-0- 記住要話k.c鐘意灰煙a_a")
其實樓主可以整1d 自己諗出黎既技能(灰煙個招叫做 幻影星塵)
Originally posted by tamtamex at 2006-9-23 18:50:
冇問題冇問題@@
自創招式都冇問題
多謝意見
亦多謝支持
Originally posted by [C.P.S]AK47 at 2006-9-23 18:54:
可以話會長打暈佐希星
想打死k.c..係個1"黑"
灰煙出現佐 help佐k.c
k.c就唔洗死
之後就對灰煙有好感
Originally posted by tamtamex at 2006-9-23 19:02:
出埸方面就唔可以咁快-口-""
遲一至兩集先可以出埸/ . \
請見諒- -""
Originally posted by [C.P.S]AK47 at 2006-9-23 19:08:
是但啦-3-
Originally posted by n乂t at 2006-9-23 19:53:
碼頭= ="上去青基踩至尊埸?
Originally posted by |‘阿希 at 2006-9-23 22:36:
唔係呸咩- -???
快d改左佢
未有人睇到= =
Originally posted by tamtamex at 2006-9-23 22:18:
第九話:激戰!?
虎令學生會長本能地向後一躍就避過了希星這一拳,虎令學生會長:「唉,你都好似未夠班同我打喎。」希星怒目而視虎令學生會長,虎令學生會長:「咁樣望住我冇用架喎,出手la。我諗你可以比頭先果個打耐d既 ...
Originally posted by [C.P.S]AK47 at 2006-9-23 22:39:
點呢-0-
係邊個幫k.c呢
會唔會係灰煙呢
就要收睇下1集-0-k.c之死
Originally posted by tamtamex at 2006-9-23 22:42:
實不相瞞@﹏@
k.c到大結局都冇事架-﹏-
不過希星之後會有事@@
Originally posted by [C.P.S]AK47 at 2006-9-23 22:43:
=000000=好野
灰煙冇佐個情敵喇a___________________a"
Originally posted by tamtamex at 2006-9-23 22:46:
我將你既出埸提早左
巳nt兄就同你既出埸時間調轉左-,-"
Originally posted by [C.P.S]AK47 at 2006-9-23 22:48:
多謝曬wo-0-v
Originally posted by tamtamex at 2006-9-23 22:56:
你絕招就叫幻影星塵
要唔要我幫你加多d自創招?
咁樣好唔好?
Originally posted by chanlapsum at 2006-9-23 22:59:
G0Od ! VeRY GooD!!Ur penis is very short now... it was long, !!!beucase u always eat it!!so don't eat it idiot fool foolist nooblet teletubbe kay!?
Originally posted by tamtamex at 2006-9-23 23:06:
你係咪想引起罵戰?
定呃post啊?
仲有啊你打錯字
Originally posted by [C.P.S]AK47 at 2006-9-23 23:08:
樓主快d作啦-0-
我想而家有得睇
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